Mena Pheno's Investigation of Castle Fort - Phenomena by Debie

This is a fascinating project. Readers are often fascinated by paranormal activity. I am interested in working with you on this project and at this time I have some questions. 1. Are you working on a novel or short story? 2. Have you thought about revising to establish an appropriate mood for a paranormal story from the first sentence. I believe that you could use many different tools to establish an eerie atmosphere to capture the attention of readers from the first sentence.

You've got to love the paranormal, you can always make it unique! Would love to help with the editing process should you need it. All the best! Hisano Xelax

I would like to suggest that you read some scary stories by experts who establish a feeling of impending trouble. Young Goodman Brown by Hawthorne is one that comes to mind immediately. You can find the text at the following - http://www.online-literature.com/hawthorne/158/ Not only does Hawthorne establish a atmosphere of impending danger, he heightens the atmosphere by inserting the impending possibilities into a wonderful young marriage and a recent bride with pretty pink ribbons in her hair. This is