Pirates Vs Fairies by haryzac

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Summary

Deep within the hollow of a magical tree is a world of pirates, fairies, dinosaurs and hippos; it is a world of adventure and magic and it is on the calm seas of that world where Capden Den, a brave and clumsy pirate captain, rescues two fairies from a small wooden boat.

Pirates and fairies have a deep mistrust with each other. Despite this, Capden Den agrees to help Prince Purplerain and Princess Caldora find her mother, the fairy queen Loukatos, who has escaped to a hideaway on a secluded beach from the oppressive rule of her husband, the fairy king.

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A wonderfully mythical summary. I would very much like to help out at the editing stage.

Hi Haryzac, Some interesting elements here. Are you writing a picture book, "tween novel"? I am interested in work...
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Hi Haryzac, Some interesting elements here. Are you writing a picture book, "tween novel"? I am interested in working with you as a writing coach. Please let me know if you would like to work with me. Barbara92106

Some interesting elements here.

Haryzac I was wondering at the age group you would be pitching this story at, because in your prologue you seam to be...
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Haryzac I was wondering at the age group you would be pitching this story at, because in your prologue you seam to be going for a youngish sort of reader. This comes across in the voice of your narator. Only you are asking them to grasp a lot of complicated things.