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Jade McKenzie has always lived every girls fairytale dream. She is middle class, popular, beautiful, healthy, skinny, intelligent, and is the school heartthrobs girlfriend. But Jade's life begins to spiral downwards as someone from her past makes an appearance.  After a month, her life has gone from perfect to the life of an outcast. Her friends avoid her, her boyfriend cruelly dumped her for another, and she loses herself. Months pass by and Jade has gone into depression grieving over her former life. But right when she decides to end it all for good, the new kid takes an interest in her. They become close and Jade leans on him for support and slowly, she is picking up the pieces of her heart. But things take a turn for the worst as her distant past comes back to haunt her and the secrets she's hidden for all these years is beginning to come out. Jade soon realizes this and returns into her anti-social self. Will the new kid be able to help her? Or will she simply be lost forever?

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Hi Midnight Blossom, I think you have some interesting ingredients for a fascinating story. Do you see this as a nov...
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Hi Midnight Blossom, I think you have some interesting ingredients for a fascinating story. Do you see this as a novel, short story, screenplay? I would be interested in working with you as a writing coach. Let me know if you are interested.

Some interesting elements here.

I like the idea and would like to see the work you are doing on the first chapter